Comments on: When you’re about to die, your life does NOT flash before your eyes.

By: Nutty Mummy

Nutty Mummy — Wed, 10 Jan 2007 20:36:25 +0000

hmmm.. sneaky .. don’t ruin it for others .. I’ll stick with my perspective

By: tylerlizenby

tylerlizenby — Wed, 10 Jan 2007 00:31:18 +0000

I will say this though. The narrator is a woman.

By: tylerlizenby

tylerlizenby — Tue, 09 Jan 2007 19:32:55 +0000

If you want me to state the unstated subtext I’ll do it. but I don’t want to stop anyone from interpreting it in their own way.

By: Nutty Mummy

Nutty Mummy — Tue, 09 Jan 2007 19:00:49 +0000

that’s almost beautiful it’s so moving. I only say almost because it’s so sad. I was enjoying it and when it got to the part of the rapist my hand went involuntarily to my mouth with shock. Is that the reaction that you were hoping for?
Can I ask you.. why does she need to share in his bleeding. I got the impression from the story that it was her new boyfriend that was taunting him, not her. Just wondering.

By: pinkjellybaby

pinkjellybaby — Tue, 09 Jan 2007 12:24:35 +0000

i love this story, well done

By: Justen

Justen — Tue, 09 Jan 2007 12:05:55 +0000

You don’t hear about gay rape very often- unless the narrator is a lesbian- your short does its job by making me think.